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Christmas Shopping

I bravely went Xmas shopping at the mall Took my plastic, trying to buy gifts for all I started to sigh then began to cry Ill be paying for this junk until next fall... For Carolyn's contest

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Audrey Haick

Date: 11/29/2010 12:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's Contest, Barbara! Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2010 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/28/2010 10:05:00 PM

All too true. Congratulations Barbara. Love, Joyce

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/28/2010 6:26:00 PM

winner is surely is, barbara.. congrats!! warmest, nette

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/28/2010 4:53:00 PM

perfect commercial christmas sentiment and concise! Well done Barbara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2010 4:43:00 PM

Barbara, though this was very short, it was also VERY good. Congratulations, dear. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/28/2010 2:22:00 PM

Congratulations on this win for the excellent entry to the contest, Barbara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2010 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2010 11:46:00 AM

Ill be paying for this junk until next fall... Yep, araid so, Barbara. "Congratulations" Barbara, on a poem's worthy recognition. Agape, Moses

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/28/2010 11:02:00 AM

You wrote a great Limerick here, dear Barbara. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Love, Iolanda and Repo Santa :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/28/2010 7:23:00 AM

Barbara, you and Audrey have a similar perspective on Christmas. Very good poem! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/16/2010 5:15:00 PM

:) Thanks for supporting the contest, dear LNC. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/16/2010 1:12:00 PM

realistic thoughts on how the Christmas affects the valet, barbara