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CHRISTMAS ROMANCE

It was the Eve before Christmas, every tree covered in snow, Bonnie was walking Plato her poodle, conscious to keep to the road, As she nonchalantly walked, she thought of Derrick her Danish beau, He was the one that she wished to be by her side as they grew old. . Imagine if he proposed tonight, she thought as she strolled, He is the moon and the stars if she should become Lost in the dark, and her warmth if she shivered when she was cold, Her compass in life. Although she wore gloves her hands felt numb. Bonnie quickened her pace back, her dad said in a low tone, a guest has arrived, Her adrenaline pumped and her palpitations went into over-drive. She rushed upstairs, straight into the arms of her love, Derrick she cried, He sat her down on the bed, suddenly she was full of life. Derrick presented Bonnie with an open box, her adrenaline went crazy again, Will you marry me he asked, yes yes, you are the love of my life Derrick, Bonnie rushed downstairs to tell her parents, and tried to somehow regain Her composure. Congratulations were said and accepted; Bonnie’s joy was magnetic. They went to a popular pub in the village, Bonnie flashing her ring, She walked over to the juke box sensually, with poise, which accentuated Her sensuous figure, and a tantalizing cleavage, her raven black shimmering Hair, she swept off her face and seductively Derrick she beckoned. The engaged to be married couple swayed to the music as if they were one, Derrick looked at his watch. It’s late , so they left the pub somewhat tipsy, Feather like snow fell on their faces sobering them up, tonight was fun, They agreed and exhausted, fell into each other’s arms so delightfully. Their heightened passionate and undulating love continued till dawn arrived And so they awoke to a fairy-tale Christmas Morn, within soaked satin sheets, Breakfasts aromas wafted upstairs, bacon, coffee, freshly baked bread, they grabbed Their carefully selected gifts, and donned their gowns, there were even chocolate treats. Wow exclaimed Derrick, Happy Christmas everyone

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Date: 12/17/2023 2:38:00 PM
Lovely romantic pen Jennifer with nice imagery and fine rhyme too. Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 12/9/2023 9:09:00 PM
What an engaging story of love and romance! On the Eve of Christmas Derrick and Bonnie decided to live for ever as man and wife. I can imagine the excitement of Bonnie when Derrick asked for her hand in marriage.... the most fulfilling moment in the life of a young lady. With your exceptional skill for story telling, once more, you have captured your readers' attention. Wish you and your family a Merry Christmas dear Jenny !
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Date: 12/4/2023 1:33:00 PM
Jennifer, your ability to convey tales in your unique fashion is truly remarkable; you immediately captivate the reader, and the chocolate treats appear delectable. Your posts consistently provide a delightful reading experience and are a delight to behold.
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Date: 11/29/2023 6:46:00 AM
Oh Jennifer. Good Morning. You grace us with the holiday and love. What a beautiful and meaningful winning combination. Truly. Your writing is clear and vivid that we are all in the scene with them all. Merry Christmas... Thank you for always sharing your skilled writing talent for you know how to tell a story with poetic elements. Have a beautiful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always as we toast to a magical Christmas Eve. (smile) - PS - I will return again very soon
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Date: 11/26/2023 6:39:00 PM
Well-developed romantic narrative poem, Jennifer! Janice
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Date: 11/21/2023 4:23:00 PM
Incredibly romantic winter! A lovely poetic story Jennifer! <3
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Date: 11/21/2023 8:04:00 AM
This is absolutely lovely. Nice job Jennifer. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/15/2023 1:26:00 PM
My goodness what a romantic winter tale this. You are a story teller, Jennifer! I sure wish I had time to look at more of your poetry, but sadly I am way behind on comments and I'm trying to get to as many of my friends' comments as I can before they scroll off into never never land!
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Date: 11/15/2023 2:53:00 AM
- You are so good at writing these stories, dear Jenny - A story that is entertaining, romantic and lovely ... a joy to read :) - Have a wonderful pre-Christmas with your sweet granddaughter :) - hugs
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Date: 11/14/2023 3:38:00 PM
A very romantic poem with a fairy tale ending, Lovely write Jennifer
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Date: 11/14/2023 2:10:00 PM
Lovely storytelling Jennifer in your own unique style... you have the reader gripped from the start and chocolate treats sounds great! Always a pleasure to see you post and to read your words..
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Date: 11/13/2023 6:52:00 PM
A sweet romance. Was worried that a tragedy was coming. So glad they had a nice night out and got home safe.
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Date: 11/11/2023 8:23:00 PM
Christmas is a great time to be in love! I love your Christmas poem, Jennifer. Thanks for sharing it with us, my dear friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 11/8/2023 10:39:00 PM
'Ever the contrarian,' I just have to wonder: What if 'Plato the Pluto' had stolen the thunder?! ~ Krimmy Null Musings
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Date: 11/8/2023 12:00:00 PM
What a romantic Christmas story. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/7/2023 1:38:00 PM
A happy romantic Christmas tale Jennifer…very lovely!! Debx
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Date: 11/6/2023 8:05:00 PM
Jennifer, what an engaging and sweetly written narrative of Christmas love come true. Held me captive! Wonderful! xoxo
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Date: 11/6/2023 10:58:00 AM
Double happiness expressed, dear friend! Christmas AND an engagement - the hope for new life born on two fronts! Nice metaphor! Story well told in flowing lines. Have to admit I did hold my breath a little to see if the other shoe would drop!!! But, you left me a warm glow like a beautiful Christmas morning! Thank you for these lovely moments! Blessings and hugs!
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Date: 11/6/2023 7:08:00 AM
A lovely write. I enjoyed it... Christmas will be here before we know it. The stores are filled to the top.... Have a great/blessed day writing away...................
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Date: 11/6/2023 2:47:00 AM
A feel good poem with a happy ending, well written Jennifer, can't believe Christmas is just around the corner. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 11/5/2023 9:14:00 PM
wow I love the build up to what turned into a gripping passionate romantic tale and I'm so glad it had a happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx
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