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Christmas Magic

Christmas magic Clinquant faces when bear a joyous glow, Huge trees, jingle bells, colourful candles, Revive last year's zest to see Christmas snow, Illuminated houses and dreams of angels, Singing carols, we dance to perfect grace, Till essence of love attains its peak flair, Magical white covers on trees embrace, As silky pearl snowflakes float in the air, Spreading across walkways, it touches soft, Magnificent shine with brilliant sunrise, As beaming kids slide, tumble and fly aloft, Gala fest spirit comes as no surprise, Idolise celebrating till twelfth night, Chasing innocent dreams that sparkle bright ! Written Dec 19th, 2015 Sonnet acrostic in Iambic pentameter For contest by Andrea Awarded 11th place win

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Date: 12/26/2015 8:12:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest. Nicely done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/25/2015 2:48:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your win :) Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! SKAT
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Date: 12/24/2015 4:38:00 PM
Glad to see you on my winners' list, Upma. You had some great imagery with the snowflakes Looking at it again, I feel bad I did not place it higher! One suggestion so you will do better with me next time. Put periods when a sentence is finished instead of too many commas! Congrats for your win.
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