Get Your Premium Membership

Christmas Magic

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sheri Fresonke Harper.


Christmas Magic

A small bundle, briquette, blanket wrapped held close to heart. Soon the new. We wonder will we be trapped? When we travel along the road, back through time to our roots, our father’s father and beyond our mother’s mother. Lamps turn down, collars turn upward. Blue night ablaze with stars, some fall Burst. Like the whisper of prayers, the word. One star shines brighter than all, Venus? Candlelight flickers from doorways. Laughter raucuous, cheerings of praise. The balance between my life and my passage flickers as if blown between the worlds whose love would I hold up high like a mage? No matter, the answer flows through me chaos of love the answer to all I seek love to each, hugs to the other, cheek to cheek. Lights out we are still ablaze remembering all the light flickering down like scents of pine, coal, cinnamon for days and fall about us like snowflakes, we taste wine, warmth burning through to numb toes Are we there yet? When have we left? Who knows? Sheri Fresonke Harper 11-30-2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/27/2013 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Sheri for the original and exciting contest you created. I hadn't a clue what assonance and consonance were, and now feel that I am a better poet having learned. I am glad for the comment detailing what you liked about my poem too; very helpful to know what the strong points are.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/24/2013 1:22:00 AM
Sheri, Guess what? , The end of the year is approaching :) and there's no way I'm letting this year end, without dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTAMS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
Login to Reply
Date: 12/18/2013 4:37:00 PM
love this deep, deep write, my friend
Login to Reply
Date: 12/15/2013 9:31:00 AM
wonderful write Sheri...Merry Christmas
Login to Reply
Date: 12/14/2013 9:34:00 PM
this poem has great atmosphere!!! Very eloquent writing.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/14/2013 4:38:00 PM
what a lovely write
Login to Reply
Date: 12/1/2013 12:05:00 AM
Beautiful inspiring thoughts, Sheri
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things