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Christmas Carol

Christmas Carol's On the streets again Turning tricks While the clock ticks Towards the saviour's day No seat by the fire, No pies and mulled wine She pulls up her knickers And steps back in line A fat man arrives To empty his sacks But this sadistic 60-year-old Is no Santa Claus He's Old Nick instead And Carol gets One hell of a beating As her festive gift

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/10/2009 7:35:00 AM
That is a terrible sad situation for these women who are manipulated by other people's acts,its so sad to think of Carol whilst we re enjoying our christmas carol--very well penned and so much truth in this poem--charma
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Date: 2/18/2009 6:19:00 AM
Another brilliant write my friend. This is good writing that many need to read.Creative thinking that flows in this piece..So happy that I ran into your work.
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