Christmas Alone

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Poetic Form: Sapphic Stanza

Inspired: 2023 December 05

*2nd Place*
Christmas
Contest Judged: 2023 December 08
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Image: N/A

Buttered pancakes, hot cocoa, cinnamon sticks, Knitted neck shawls, all buttoned up jackets, "Phew," Some are ice skating, or skiing, and sledding, ~~"Ohh Little...," is sung, Fabric weaves hills of ivory silk frosting, Spilling streams of cream, pouring milk all astir, Grizzlies, snoring, un-grizzled hibernal eve, ~~day's sun soon freezes, Night has fallen ... sleep for some while others aren't, Stars found a place for dangling nighttime twinkles, Classic moon balm tryst desires, tarries sunrise, ~~hourglass sands sun soon.

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Constance La France

Date: 12/15/2023 4:26:00 PM

Hilo, thank you so much for entering my Christmas contest and congratulations on your win, lovely poem, Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/15/2023 4:28:00 PM

Thx Constance, Aloha, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/9/2023 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. I enjoyed reading it.... Have a wonderful day/weekend.................

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/9/2023 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. You have a blessed day too. Aloha, William

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/8/2023 4:16:00 PM

All these are a few of my favorite things,) hoping you are never alone. Aloha Anaya

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/8/2023 5:46:00 PM

Nope, I need a time out, I need a time-outside, it's not that I'm stressed, --it just everyday, the same faces, eh.

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/7/2023 1:14:00 PM

A rich picture here Hilo..B t w, hello.' Good to Read your piece; on this evening in Britian.

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/7/2023 2:58:00 PM

Aloha, Joe, read a few of yours, apologies inferred, my friend. Thought you'd be an Aussie, OMGaffe. The lil' prince hands then whence I shook, staying at my workplace--wanting to look at S.F. and the Golden Gate from his sweet. I wrote him a tidbit, unsure he read it--secret service, and all. Mahalo on your points-of-view, --William