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Surrounded by the glitz and frippery the ribbons, bells and stars all meant to warm you, on the mantelpiece, parading with the cards the one that silently ' regrets to inform you'. Muffled merriment, jaded joy from those who gently tiptoe round your loss, they turn their heads to gaze up at the tree as you turn yours to gaze down at the cross. How many times a century ago was this scene playing out from street to street, as far away in muddied bloodied fields the unknown sank beneath their comrade's feet? You walked those trenches, too, not long ago, at Ypres bowed our heads for the last post, stood speechless at Tyne Cot in rows of stone, raised a glass to those that fell and drank a toast. Then only yesterday the word came through you'd lost a bitter battle of your own, this time the only casualty was you, and so I raise this glass to you alone. Sleep well, my friend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/18/2015 5:13:00 AM
Viv excellent tribute congrats on being featured hugs 7
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/18/2015 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, Shadow, for popping by. If you ever get the chance to tour the battlefields of the Somme (especially during this Centeneray year) I recommend it. Sadly, my best friend accompanied me last year, but fell ill in December and passed away. I shall return next year to raise a glass. God bless, Viv x
Date: 4/17/2015 2:25:00 PM
Wonderful tribute mate. How you seamlessly incorporate so much. Great stuff.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/17/2015 11:30:00 PM
Thanks for the comment, Scott. Whether it be a close friend or the millions that I never knew, death diminishes us all. Regards, Viv
Date: 4/15/2015 6:27:00 PM
This was brilliantly worded. I especially love the opening four lines. Excellent work, and thank you for sharing it.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/16/2015 12:50:00 AM
Thank you for your comments, Preston, very kind of you. Often the case with verse of a personal nature, very little effort is required, and the right words materialize almost of their own volition. Regards, Viv
Date: 2/1/2015 8:51:00 AM
Loved this piece Viv, of loss and remembrance, truly moving!.
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, William. I wrote this in the early hours after learning of the death of my best friend of 42 years, who had accompanied me on a WWI battlefield tour of France and Belgium last August. A tribute to someone I knew and the millions I didn't, really.

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