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Chori Ka Phal

Mai chori ka phal tha Jisay too nai sab say chupa k rakha tha tairai narm honto say jo chootai chootai kisi khoaf ka aatshei daaira ban k khrrki say bahar parra tha.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 10:59:00 PM

hey, Hammad, back again, I tried using my translator on your other poems, and it does not make sense.. would you be kind to add an English note in the future. I'm not talking about this poem. your poem 'tum say nahee and so on... anyways, I was just wondering. LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 1:07:00 AM

H Z, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2016 9:54:00 PM

thank you for sharing...SKAT