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To relieve the ache, one may start A repair of sorts for a broken heart Piece back up, mend together Resolve this fix will last forever Careful choice of threads of gold Stitch so careful, ensure they hold This time they will not come undone Now that the healing has begun "Caress the broken heart with threads of muted sound" A silent song that leaves me spellbound Final end to painful yearning Lessons of love, so sadly learning Fractured and aching, silent cries Determination to be next time wise Falling in love precedes falling apart Go on I must, with my delicate heart #2

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Date: 8/13/2023 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your write. Have a great day with your win............
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Date: 8/13/2023 2:21:00 PM
Thank you Paula
Date: 8/13/2023 7:22:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/13/2023 2:21:00 PM
Many thanks
Date: 8/9/2023 9:43:00 PM
good relevant imagery with "threads" and such! :)
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Date: 8/9/2023 9:56:00 PM
Thanks Michelle x
Date: 7/15/2023 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful poem, DD:) pain brings out the best ones, doesn't it?? thank you for my placement in your ekphrasis contest:) honoured:)
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Date: 7/15/2023 8:23:00 AM
You're welcome Jo, fantastic entry! I've not quite figured out happy poems yet haha :) thanks for your kind words x

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