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Choka Me and I Will Choka You

in a forest...bare we lay warm on living soil inhale the flesh scented night exhale...trading breaths under a manicured moon nature plays love's binding song Maurice Yvonne September 25 2014 Contest: Choka Me Sponsor: Dr. Ram Metha

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2014 2:04:00 AM

coming around again to send you my congrats, maurice.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 9:43:00 PM

For sure it deserved a higher placement! Congrats, I loved seeing it again.

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/27/2014 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations, Maurice. Beautifully done...love the manicured moon.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/27/2014 10:05:00 AM

And back wid huge congrats on ur winning awesome write Maurice!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2014 8:52:00 AM

I love this one, I am glad it is on the list. It was good to read it again. Congratulations.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 9/27/2014 8:21:00 AM

Good morning Maurice, Congratulations on your excellent nature choka win. Have a great week end. Earl

Paul Callus

Date: 9/27/2014 8:00:00 AM

...back with congratulations....for a choka chokablock with sensuality.

Tim Smith

Date: 9/27/2014 6:15:00 AM

Congrats brother..... You can put the real title now "Me and Jan in Neverland"

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/27/2014 5:50:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and support. Congrats on the win, Maurice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2014 10:14:00 PM

ooh la la under a manicured moon, that is so creative!! I love the romantic ones that are in the tanka and choka form. VERY well crafted. this one should surely merit a good placement!