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Below is the poem entitled Chocolates which was written by poet CRYSTAL MAAHI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Chocolates are my need,
Chocolates are my greed,
When I have them I only and only dream and don’t know actually what I feel.
They make me happy,
They make me sad,
They are there with me in all the queries I have.
They also help me before exams.
 When I don’t get them I really mourn,
But as they melt in my mouth I become lively and cheerful.
When I see a chocolate I glow like an Edison’s bulb,
But as they go the bulb turns to 0 watt.

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  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:12:00 AM
    mmm how sweet,,, I love chocolates... i like the sneaky sneaky, thoughts when you get them bright ideas... such a fun poem... LINDA

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Yeah an excellent poem,nicely created. Welcome to poetrysoup,here is a safe haven where u unleash your talents and have them sharpen by the wonderful older soupers here. Alwaz, Bob-based on beliefs.