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Chocolate Lust

I got off the busy downtown bus. my heels clicked away without a fuss, heading straight to a shop called Chocolate Lust, a sign read, 'All You Can Eat Chocolate Until You Bust,' I knew I was in heaven when looking about, chocolate was everywhere making me want to shout, this confectionary eden made my knees quite weak, as I walked up to the counter and took a peek, staring before me were decadent peanut clusters, crunchy and sweet also known as diet busters, all my self-control was ignored at the Chocolate Lust, a shop for chocoholics which insists that eating candy is a must. (Classical rhyme)

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Date: 5/30/2017 9:06:00 AM
Congrats on your win , Sonia. I think I'll take a chocolate break now! Janice
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Sonia Walker
Date: 5/30/2017 5:43:00 PM
Janice, thank you for the delicious comment on my poem, 'Chocolate Lust.' ~ Sonia
Date: 5/30/2017 8:46:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my rhyme battle contest, Sonia! This was excellent :) Love, Juli-Michelle
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Sonia Walker
Date: 5/30/2017 5:46:00 PM
Juli-Michelle, I am honored for placing within your fun contest. Thank you for your encouraging comment on my poem, 'Chocolate Lust.' ~ Sonia
Date: 4/12/2017 2:03:00 AM
Oh well, there goes my diet! Great write Sonia and congratulations on your win! :-)
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Sonia Walker
Date: 4/13/2017 12:01:00 AM
Mark, thank you for your your encouragement on my poem, 'Chocolate Lust. ~ Sonia
Date: 12/15/2016 5:35:00 AM
SW. You even have SCOTCH named after you. Have you ever eaten Chocolate Pie or pudding before? Yummy. Oh, and Devil's Food Cake. Jim Horn
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Sonia Walker
Date: 12/15/2016 8:46:00 AM
Jim, I have been a chocoholic for years. Thanks to you, I will be having a piece of chocolate cake with rich frosting for breakfast this morning. ~ Sonia
Date: 12/14/2016 8:34:00 PM
Love this chocoholic write Sonia; I stay away from it because I am one too, lol!:)
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Sonia Walker
Date: 12/14/2016 8:50:00 PM
Cheryl, as I was writing this poem, I could smell the chocolate. Thanks for the fun comment. ~ Sonia

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