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Chlorinated

stripped bare i stood quivering breathing the air sweaty and staggering rectangular sanctum in front of me offer the purity that autumn lacked so desperately wading through this mass anew i question my own motives for leaving you frustrated now i rise to the ground unfamiliar affections are overrated the pool is chlorinated

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Date: 7/29/2009 7:36:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading you work this afternoon, Brandon! You have a good sense of rhythm, and uncommonly fine command of language. Your imagination and your sense of humour are lively too. This poem has a very nice wry touch - i like it a lot ... keep writing!
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