Chinky Eyes

sparkling brightly , chinky-eyed pretty lady tearful eyes last night.

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Jim Tidd

Date: 1/9/2014 9:55:00 AM

Dark, mysterious pools of bold obsidian pull the viewer in.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/9/2014 9:58:00 AM

thank you for the visit and comment, Jim!!! :))

Michael Byte

Date: 1/3/2014 5:11:00 PM

Good wish you were closer I would be a friend you have never had to help with all the pain you are feeling. Just remember smile and people will wonder what you been up to. Your dearest soup friend Michael xoxo

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/6/2014 9:06:00 AM

thank you for the friendship...you guyz are so kind to me..THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/3/2014 12:26:00 PM

- Smile my sweet friend :) - sad thoughts in your haiku, but good ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 1/3/2014 12:38:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-lise..:)) just sharing the world what i've been through..^__^