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Chillin'

C ontentment on hot summer days is to lay me down gently upon the glossy, cool, red ceramics tiles, that refresh and tantalize bare skin H alf naked, brown and melting, like chocolate on your tongue I ndifferent to peering eyes of strangers wandering about L eaving inquisitives to brainstorm about “Are they, or not”; secret laughs shared we live only in our daydreams of love’s passionate connection L oving summer nights rendezvous beneath sister moon and her entourage of millions of twinklin stars I gniting latent fires that still smolder amidst the ash, barely breathing anticipating N ights of in ocean side palaces of sky and sand; enjoying soft warm breezes that cool passion's thirst, as the sound of a lonely sax wafts through the palms, has us drifting off to the soothing lullaby of rolling, crashing waves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2013 1:00:00 AM
so glad I chose this beautiful write, my friend : )
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Date: 8/18/2010 5:13:00 PM
summer is really hot! a great way out to just be chillin without a care in the world!(: i enjoyed your write, Audrey. i hope your days are well. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/16/2010 11:37:00 AM
Stopping by to wish you a wonderful inspiration filled week. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, thank you for sharing it Audrey. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2010 1:05:00 AM
A hot passionate beautiful acrostic. .Audrey tnks for being an inspiration for me to write again,that poem 'i am gonna die' started as a hearty poem..then somehow changed itself to a fun one,if im gonna die,no sadness on that day,I never participate in contests,but tnks for the inspiration,love Celene(you have soup mail)
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:09:00 PM
Great write and excellent meaning you have attached in your acrostic poem. Many thanks on placing me 4th place in your first sponsored contest. I'll be always supportive in your other poetic endeavor. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:36:00 PM
I concur with Allysa, Dimples, this is a superior acrostic. It creates such a wonderfully loving and sensual mood. Great work, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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