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Chill Neanderthal It Is a Mercury Night

It is so cold I feel Like A robot Stove No Warm Me With My old War surplus Gasbag Viet Nam Pants Pulled Over My Jeans My Body Wants Sex My Mind Wants Friends Cooling Already To A compromise The Inflatable Santa Next Door Just Collapsed Car Screeching Away Ha Ha No Point In Putting Up Those Christmas Lights Tomorrow Is there it Is Raining And I Miss Carol She Gave Me The Pants After a Protest When

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Date: 12/14/2009 6:54:00 PM
I like this and the reason is it tell a story and throws emotion in there along with the cold which can be felt very nice
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Date: 12/10/2009 10:45:00 PM
Thank you Constance, and it is indeed COLD here. You have more music in your poems, than I. Tom
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Date: 12/10/2009 10:31:00 PM
I love this style of writing, it sort of just takes one along quickly, you have some good lines in your poem. Well done.
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