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Chile In Argony

Houses in rubble Concepción fallen in argony The world is in grief

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/13/2010 5:02:00 PM

I have never heard of potato salad made that way-sounds taste worthy!! thanks for your comments too!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:27:00 PM

It just keeps coming and coming from all parts of the world. So scary. And you capture that in our last line. LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/4/2010 12:49:00 PM

deep and heartbreaking..This world is finding its end as it seems..great senryu.great..ChARMa

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2010 10:00:00 AM

Great write considering the earthquakes of late. Keep the descriptive writes flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Farah Chamma

Date: 3/4/2010 12:28:00 AM

Yes the situation is quite devastating. May Allah be with them. Farah

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/2/2010 8:40:00 PM

Yes, a very awful event with incredible loss and cost. Well written Haiku. I pray for those who have lost so much. Best wishes, Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2010 1:48:00 PM

There seem to be so many natural disasters occurring right now. I can only wonder where the next strike will take place, Gert. Indeed, our world grieves for the victims. Terrific senryu! Love, Carolyn

Susan Palli

Date: 3/2/2010 12:12:00 PM

You got the emotion.

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/2/2010 11:59:00 AM

My heart goes out to the Chileans at this time. ...I wish them well. ....Peace, Audrey

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/2/2010 9:37:00 AM

Depressing.... How tragic this haiku is... Well written and true to form.... Good job my friend.....:JP]