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Childhood Spirit

From the kitchen sink at the window sill, I see a house on the distant hill, when as a child I had time to kill, where now my spirit wanders still. Then life changed on a day that’s dire, we choked on smoke and could see the fire - that hillside died from that burning pyre, now it’s uniform green and squared by wire. So childhood spirit of years gone by, stick to your guns and never die. Take me beyond where the youngsters ply, where the woodlands grew and so did I. We fed our chooks on the table scraps, snared wild rabbits in rabbit traps, lemonade was brought with screwed in caps, and our old farm dog just yaps and yaps ‘til we let him off. “Way back!” was said, and the cattle moved to the milking shed. Cans were filled and the calves were fed, hay was stored for the months ahead. So childhood spirit of years gone by, stick to your guns and never die, those years on the land got us by, where the farm was small and so was I. Ti-tree’s gone where the swamp frogs sang, no circle of fear from the black snake fang, hawthorn’s cleared so there’s no Gang-Gang, it’s deathly quiet where the Bellbirds rang, there’s no defence from the progress pack, now bitumen lies on the old dirt track, the gums are cleared and they can’t grow back, the red brick forest to me looks black. So childhood spirit of years gone by, stick to your guns and never die, remember the bush and the filtered sky, where the world’s at peace and so was I. The evening smell from the baker’s bread, and two-up played in the old pub shed, the hawker’s bell on his horse named Ned, sinkers made from the scraps of lead. Then something died with the whistle shrill, when no steam trains came down Red Hill, where I picked up their black coal spill, for our old wood stove in the winter chill. So childhood spirit of years gone by, stick to your guns and never die, If you’re feeling lost and you don’t know why, please comfort me - for so do I. To pioneer ghosts who led the way, I followed you but I find today, we’ve come too far now I sadly say, that the land will finally make us pay. Our water’s gray that flows through here, top soil drains from the hills we clear, but the young ones vision now is to steer, a warmer heart to this land so dear. So childhood spirit of years gone by, stick to your guns and never die, if you feel there’s a need to cry, shed your tears through my glistened eye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/18/2016 11:57:00 AM
I just love these poems that tell of bygone days. Days that were built out of honesty, hard graft - And plain old decency! And before any of you naysayers poo poo all of this...just think on: This is not selective nostalgia or some sort of soppy malaise - It is hard fact! Morality and conscientiousness - Its all gone down the pan, brother. Damn fine work, Lindsay - absolutely loved it!! A seven. My very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/18/2016 6:10:00 PM
G'day John ... thanks for the great comment. I see this all today. Once Melbourne was light years away - now we're close to being a suburb - catch you soon - Lindsay
Date: 3/18/2016 11:33:00 AM
This is one of the bright part of a moody day as today for me. I am blessed reading this piece. Keep on writing lovely. cheers!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/18/2016 6:05:00 PM
Hello Funom ... thank you for commenting Funom. Pleased I could lift your spirits a mite - Lindsay
Date: 3/12/2016 1:29:00 AM
Lindsay, it is always uplifting to read a poem of yours. This one touches the heart of my childhood too. Beautirul! #7
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 3/18/2016 12:13:00 AM
Hello Connie ... thank you for your kind comment Connie. I'm sure many of us when kids could relate to some of this poem - Lindsay
Date: 3/9/2016 5:36:00 PM
Lindsay: so much I could relate to in this poem. A definite 7 and just added to my favorite poems to read again. Thanks for keeping these stories alive, cheers SuZ
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Date: 3/17/2016 9:39:00 PM
Hello Suzanne ... I'm pleased that you could relate to this poem Suzanne. So much of our rural history is disappearing now - thank you - Lindsay
Date: 3/9/2016 3:34:00 PM
very nostalgic write, Lindsay, I tend to write this way when I do poems on my childhood and home town. there is no bringing it back. Such a sad thing!! I think you did superb the way you put three different rhymes per stanza and always repeated the I rhyme in last part. I love seeing patterns in poetry.
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Date: 3/17/2016 9:27:00 PM
Thank you for your comment Andrea. I must admit I do prefer poetry that rhymes and have a pattern - Lindsay

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