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Childhood Dreams

She bends to gather Getting flowers of her youth Her mother stands near Smiling with a certain warmth This is what childhood dreams are
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/25/2013 7:32:00 PM
Love this Tanka. I can image the child picking flowers and her mother near by smiling. Childhood memories those are the best time, if they involve smiles. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/23/2013 8:48:00 AM
Charming my dear friend... you nailed it! Well scribed... cheers, Jack
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Date: 1/23/2013 7:19:00 AM
Yes they are Russell I remember sitting in the meadow making daisy chains with my mum xx
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Date: 1/22/2013 10:46:00 PM
Mom and flowers, the stuff childhood dreams are made of Russell!! Beautiful.
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Date: 1/22/2013 5:04:00 PM
i seem to have lost all of my dreams. Glad you have some. Thanks to my kind friend for your heartfelt comments.
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Date: 1/22/2013 1:36:00 PM
Gorgeous write, Russell :)
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Date: 1/22/2013 1:08:00 PM
This is a very creative and warm work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2013 12:07:00 PM
Pleasant childhood memories, Russell. - Good memories and good dreams we hide deep in the heart - Never forget, they are our treasures - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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