Get Your Premium Membership

Childhood Delight

Childhood delight, if meant to be S'mores-gas-bord, little choc-o-chips A Peanut Butter-Jelly tree Capri Sun, lil' pouches - hmm - see Jumping rope, and hop a few skips Childhood delight, if meant to be Squirrels & birds, quickly, munch with glee Tree-crow protects from bunnyips A Peanut Butter-Jelly tree Sneaky, scavengers disagree these treats for itty-bitty snips Childhood delight, if meant to be Problems could arise - gollee gee Peanuts fall, they'll grab with grips A Peanut Butter-Jelly tree Nocturne critters, smaller bee leaving behind few honey drips Childhood delight, if meant to be A Peanut Butter- Jelly tree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/17/2010 5:48:00 PM
Virginia congrats on your poem being featured this week. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 3/17/2010 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Virginia. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 10:47:00 PM
Very nice poem in a Villnelle form. Congratulations being featured. Ernilando
Login to Reply
Date: 1/13/2010 3:51:00 AM
Congratulations on youir featured poem this week, Virginia, reminds me of "the good ole days" (that sounds like a poem too doesn't it) good poem filled to the brim with captivating imagery. Also like this poem of yours on childhood. Well projected in fanciful prose. Thanks for sharing- Robert
Login to Reply
Date: 10/31/2009 2:48:00 PM
Whenever I put peanuts out for my neighborhood squirrel, here come the blue jays ... LOL ... such thieves. Awesome write here, Virginia with great imagery. Been quite awhile since you've posted here at the Soup. Hope you return soon with more excellent writing!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/31/2009 8:53:00 AM
LOL cute here ! So glad you continue to add your creativity to our Soup, Virginia and I look forward to reading much more from you!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2009 7:43:00 AM
hmm, great piece about childhood days, interesting rhymes
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things