Childhood

Childhood Immature humans Learning about adulthood Playful, frolicsome, lighthearted anticipation, Young. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 22, 2010 Poetic form: Cinquain

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Steven Mossburg

Date: 2/23/2010 8:57:00 AM

This is a beautiful Cinquain. It really captures the heart of childhood in a touching way.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2010 7:01:00 AM

Another good one. I see you like cinquains. I once did a book full of quatrains for a high school assignment and the teacher never gave them back to me. My first little poems. I wish I knew what became of them, and they were part of my wonderful childhood which I sometimes miss! Luv, andrea

Troy Jeremy Nelson

Date: 2/22/2010 2:15:00 PM

this one is actually quite captivating, touches on a hint of what you dont want to admit to in what you are alluring to o f the lost innocence when reality becomes realised