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Child Unborn

On a cold and bleak November day in a lonely Deserted place a child unborn in its sanctuary Lies asleep like a bud soon to bloom A sacred gift, priceless, unique For a world that is rapidly dying On a cold and bleak November day A mother's scent will it ever know No special bond with another soul No joyful offering of 'thanks', nor smiles, Nor welcome kisses that warm the heart On a cold and bleak November day, the sky Draped in blankets of gray, hung low Over the horizon marked by fresh-fallen snow An innocent life is taken in some unholy place As consciences lay bound and silenced On a cold and bleak November day, Freewill, once more misused, hovered In the shadows abused and clothed in shame Bore witness to one of many horrors The deliberate murder of the Innocents On a cold and bleak November day a hush falls over Heaven The Son of God pleads mercy as He alone dares to speak God looks upon His only Son, once again, His anger subsides A new day is ordained-another chance to choose A priceless gift to save the world some cold bleak day

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Date: 11/2/2011 5:30:00 AM
thank you for writing this, it is a very beautiful work, and quite true. those who do not want a child should not have one. abortion is not the way to go. adoption is. i hope you are having a lovely day :) ------Ell
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:00:00 PM
Congrats Audrey on this exceptional piece being featured. It's about time it was featured. Politiicans have little respect for anything except their wallet. I wasn't a George Bush fan, but at least he had the intestinal fortitude to say he was against it. We now have one that has it vaguely(separation of birth rate) written into his health care bill. Vince
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Audrey. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:41:00 PM
Congrats Annalise on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. a wonderful one to share.. hope u will read my "...for the POETRY" new post and new blog today and leave a comment..thankxxx...my friend..
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Date: 2/19/2010 4:59:00 AM
I wrote "Why Mama Why" on this same subject when I was younger. If you have to abort, then abort the non-suypporting father to keep him from reproducing again, not the innocent child. Vince
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Date: 1/20/2010 7:28:00 AM
I really liked this poem Audrey, you portrey my feelings on the subject perfectly. This is a hard subject for me, my mom had three miscarriages when i was younger. I just dont see why people who can have children can be so selfish and kill an innocent baby; and those who actually want children can not have any. Murder is murder and a baby in the womb is a living human being shaped and molded by God, not some useless glob. Thanks for writting this..God bless Heather
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Date: 12/11/2009 6:32:00 AM
A very moving write that describe wordlessly your own sensibility. Thanks for your constant fellowship and comments on my poem, thanks for being my friend
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Date: 10/28/2009 4:36:00 PM
I must say that I adore the obeisance that you offer up to our creator.It is very pleasant to the soul to see that poets such as yourself still think deeply enough to arrive at the abyss of God.Sincerely,Eric
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Date: 10/17/2009 11:00:00 AM
Sad, sad piece Audrey >> James
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Date: 10/8/2009 12:08:00 PM
Excellent write Audrey. What a shame. So sad. Love, Carol
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