Child

Cuddling up close to teddy, Happy smile on her face she sleeps Is she remembering the circus with Lions and tigers prancing about, Dancing dogs, making her dream complete

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2013 1:18:00 AM

I didn't see this one in my contest so I can comment to it. It's CUTE!!!! How are you doing, Seren?

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/14/2013 2:03:00 AM

am ok thanks Andrea .....Seren

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/9/2013 7:58:00 PM

There is no greater joy then watching a child dreaming happily,you captured that here is this sweet write of yours. Hugs

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/14/2013 2:03:00 AM

Hi Cecilia how are you ...Seren

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/5/2013 8:00:00 PM

This is very nice. I like it. Is it for the contest? if it is - good luck... Lucilla

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/6/2013 5:21:00 AM

No not for contest Just a write ...Seren

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/4/2013 4:36:00 PM

I sent you a Soup mail.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/3/2013 6:15:00 AM

Smiling! very cute. BG

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/3/2013 9:18:00 AM

Thanks BG, wrote it for fun ...Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/3/2013 6:01:00 AM

This is quite the lovely sentimental write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a glorious piece, such a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/3/2013 9:18:00 AM

Wrote it for fun Russell, glad you liked it...Seren