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Cherry Thief

Cherry Thief ___________________ Dear Cherry, Ontop of my shake you set in red glow, you looked so delicious and vibrant, I wanted to take you between my lips and taste your sweet juices. But then, you were gone. Before I knew it, someone took you, and he held you between his perched kisser. I watched as he savored you tender moistness with delight. The last time I saw you, you were gone with a swift gulp of his greedy throat. Goodbye beloved fruit, you were so quickly taken that we didn't have much time, to even say hello. Perhaps we shall meet again one day, and when that day comes...my husband wont be near you... (LOL..just a fun little poem) 5/24/14-Jessica Thompson

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/3/2014 12:55:00 AM

talk about a metaphor. hell of a juxtaposition and damn my eyes for bulging as I read this. It truly is a 'Moving Picture', which by the way, is a rare triple entendre.

Jt Nyx
Date: 7/3/2014 8:15:00 PM

Thank you JSL, so nice to read all your kind comments about my work. I am so glad you enjoyed this piece. I will come by soon as read yours as well. Take care my friend, Jess :)

Jiril Clemons

Date: 6/9/2014 2:42:00 PM

Such a carefree, beautiful poem, Jessica. indeed, the fun is imbedded in the metaphoric writing. Great description. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Jt Nyx
Date: 7/3/2014 8:14:00 PM

Thank you so much Jiril, I am glad you enjoyed this piece. I will deff come by very soon as read some of you work. Take care friend, Jess

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/3/2014 12:50:00 PM

This is good, Jessica. Hope the soup is treating you well, my friend.

Jt Nyx
Date: 6/3/2014 2:59:00 PM

Thank you Faye, I am glad you liked this piece. I hope you are doing well my friend. Take care, Jess :)

Skat A

Date: 5/26/2014 8:52:00 PM

Hi Jessica, I like this. The color, you expose, happens to be one of my favorite colors. Cherry Red. The glow's above all. PS.... love the fun little poem...............SKAT

Jt Nyx
Date: 5/26/2014 11:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Skat..I just wanted this to be a fun little poem..and My husband even got a kick that I actually wrote a poem on what happened lol. Really glad you enjoyed and took time to comment. Always glad to hear from you. Take care my friend, Jess :)