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Cherry Blossoms

Like a robin, beyond the horizon you flew, Leaving me lonesome in the state of blue. Now how would I find you, where would I go? Sans you the glory of my heart is getting low. Your loving memories will always make me weep; Have you forgotten the promise I had told you to keep. The promise to glance as one beyond the stars; To make a new land free from all cruelty and wars. You’re my true love, not a dull game. Don't you know that you’re my only flame, Who had showed me the way towards the fairy land. Darling, I just want to hold again your hand. I can't forget those moments spent under the silvery moon. Darling, I'm waiting for you, please come back soon. I believe we’ll watch the cherry blossoms fall again; We’ll again run up to the hill, to our secret domain. _________________________________________ Contest - Tell me a story Poetry Contest Sponsored by - Brenda Chiri Date - 10/1/2016

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Date: 8/9/2017 1:03:00 PM
This is a beautiful love poem you have written. yes love poem, this is how i see this poetry. have a nice day my friend. Lucky girl.
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Date: 11/17/2016 8:40:00 AM
well written ;)
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Date: 10/18/2016 4:43:00 AM
- A wonderful and touching write, Augustus - I will give you a 7 for this one :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/6/2016 8:00:00 PM
You did a great job with this one. Makes me wish I could see that movie!! This is one I want to write for too. Thanks for your lovely comments. I am deliberately not seeing the Andrea poems. Will wait to see them all at once! (and hoping to see the ones who captured my essence!!)
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Augustus Black
Date: 10/7/2016 11:46:00 PM
Thanks a lot. Yaa that movie is very nice sad story.
Date: 10/5/2016 12:12:00 AM
Such a lovely poem. It tells all about the move. I haven't seen it but after reading your poem now I certainly want to watch it. Congrats on your win, Augustus.
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Augustus Black
Date: 10/5/2016 3:40:00 PM
oh, Afzal Yaa, why not, hope you will also like the Movie. I like the fact that you made your mind to watch that movie after reading my poem. Wow... enjoy life.... Afzal. Thank you very much.
Date: 10/4/2016 10:28:00 PM
A film to be watched late at night when subtitles work best. A sad, touching story; but, your poem makes it brighter! Congrats, Augustus. :-)
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Augustus Black
Date: 10/5/2016 3:37:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Sir. Yaa... It's a very touching movie in my view.
Date: 10/4/2016 9:08:00 PM
I just can't believe this I got Second place. I just love this site. Oh, I am very very excited.... I had never thought I will get second. 5 Centimeters per second is really a great movie. Every people should watch that movie.
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Date: 10/1/2016 5:20:00 AM
A nice poem ...
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Augustus Black
Date: 10/1/2016 6:12:00 AM
Thanks a lot. Sir

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