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Cherished Memories At Sunset

Before the sun sets I am cozy in my robe, snuggled next to my love's chest Warm and peaceful knowing all is well in this world, my nest is at it's best Before the sun sets, I want to hold your hand and remind you of our good times Forgive any bad times; cherish your face that is close to my memories Before the sun sets, gather the family close by my side and see the beauty life offers Visual stimulation by a pallete of colors, illuminated by the great light giver Before the sun sets, tell me you love me and I will see you in the morning I will hold you to your promise, and be forever searching **Inspired by: "Before the sun" sets by Sara Kendrick Sara, my mom, got me to using poetry soup and it has been therapy for me!

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Date: 7/27/2010 9:07:00 PM
DORIS , A NICE POEM , ENJOYED READING ! You have been inspired by the right person too , - SARA ! THANKS FOR READING MY POEMS DEAR ! Best wishes , -Raj
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Date: 7/24/2010 8:41:00 PM
Beautiful concept. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/23/2010 9:11:00 AM
Big congrats Doris on your win in Debbie's contest with this wonderful write from your inspiration... truly awesome.. enjoy your victory dance my friend.. hope u are felling stronger today.. with luv..
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Date: 7/23/2010 8:20:00 AM
Congrats for the 7th place win, Doris
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Date: 7/23/2010 7:41:00 AM
Congrats, Doris. Super couplet. Thoroughly enjoyed. Have a great weekend. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/22/2010 5:09:00 AM
Very well written Couplet, Doris! And thank you for your comment on "Philipp Reis". He was really in a bad position as at that time nobody in Germany had an idea about his great invention. He died too young to see his work completed. Have a great day...Gert
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Date: 7/21/2010 3:11:00 AM
Well written couplet, Doris, you have a nice way of cherishing your fond memories. Thank you for your comment to my poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 7/20/2010 7:14:00 PM
Very nice, Doris. When I see Sara's poems next time, I will have to check them out. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2010 9:51:00 AM
Great couplets that express the way many people feel especially women of what is important in life...Thanks for honoring me with the write..Mom
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Date: 7/20/2010 5:15:00 AM
Very very moving! Please do me a favor Doris and there will be no penalty if you don't...could you put your inspiration remarks at the bottom of the poem please so your fine work is highlighted ANDperhaps think on your own title? Cherish or Cherished memories would work? Light & Love
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:50:00 AM
Excellent Doris... I love the words and feeings..Always Michael
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:36:00 AM
Good morning Doris, glad our mom got you into poetry. It has a smoothing role in life, enjoyed your poem,, and i hope you are doing wellp.d.
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