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We read each other so perfectly two minds with a single thought, when we combine, baby it's explosive chemistry like ours cannot be taught. The electricity gets me jumping and attacks the heart's beat, this experiment you concocted has revived the frog's feet. Like a volcanic lava lamp an eruption of emotion flows, the heat welds me to you our bond that nobody knows. We met inside this classroom where my opposite attracted to yours, like magnetized paperclips we were linked right from our cores. We're closer than Dr. Jekyll was to his hidden self, Mr. Hyde, but, I can take you by the hand as we go along for the ride.

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Date: 6/9/2015 12:49:00 PM
An entertaining piece with some fabulous phrasing and rhyme. '...revived the frog's feet' '...a volcanic lava lamp,' (what an image!) I like your style! Best wishes, Keith
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/13/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thank you once again, Keith. This poem was a fun one to write. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 4/11/2015 3:41:00 PM
Hello Kelly, This a very good piece indeed, I dare say. I still remember your poem "Electricity" which made me in fact feel eels nearby.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/16/2015 11:13:00 PM
Hello Ivo, thank you for your kind comments... I also remember that poem and you. It is good to see you are back!
Date: 11/20/2014 10:33:00 AM
A great chemistry lesson Kelly. I marvel at your creativity. You are so great and sweet. Loved this one and added to my favlist. Hugs! XXXX RAJAT
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/24/2014 6:14:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Rajat. It means a lot to me! I really appreciate the fav, as well! Hugs :)
Date: 7/16/2014 10:24:00 PM
Kelly, I'm a little late, here you find me thanking you for the reply you left on my comment below... Thanks.. Linda
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Date: 6/26/2014 5:08:00 PM
What school does that subject was taught cause I'll enroll for the semester! Fun and cool Kelly. Grats on your win :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/29/2014 3:24:00 PM
I would enroll in that school, too, Casarah!.... I had fun writing this poem and I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the great comments and the kind congrats. I appreciate it so much!
Date: 6/25/2014 7:46:00 PM
Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/25/2014 5:08:00 PM
This chemistry is hot..congrats Tim
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/27/2014 8:15:00 PM
Thank you, Tim! I had so much fun writing this one!
Date: 6/25/2014 8:40:00 AM
Very nice write Kelly...congrats on your win
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/27/2014 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments, Joseph. I appreciate it very much!
Date: 6/25/2014 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations dear Kelly.. :) need i say more how these words combine and catalyzed to become a big winner.. :D!, olive eloisa :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/27/2014 12:13:00 PM
Thank you for the kind congrats and the great comments, dear Olive. I appreciate it very much! :)
Date: 6/25/2014 3:43:00 AM
I love your chemistry, Kelly!! Though untaught, it still seems to have originated from a classroom :) Congrats on your win. // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/27/2014 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paul! This kind of chemistry can happen anytime, and in the most unexpected places, including a classroom. :)
Date: 6/25/2014 1:36:00 AM
Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,
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Date: 6/24/2014 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations....This is a nice poem!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/26/2014 5:48:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comments and the kind congrats, Litan!
Date: 6/24/2014 8:32:00 PM
Long time no see, Kelly .. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/26/2014 1:46:00 AM
I haven't been around much lately, because there were some family issues that I had to deal with this past week. But, I'm back now and you should be seeing a lot more of me! :)
Date: 5/4/2014 4:13:00 PM
wow love this scientifically sweet write.. :D, God bless you always. :)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/7/2014 3:42:00 PM
Thank you, Olive. I do appreciate your kind words. :)
Date: 5/4/2014 1:31:00 AM
Beautiful write, Kelly. Your style is similar to mine, but unique, of course. Well done, my friend. Kudos. ~M
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/5/2014 1:35:00 PM
Thank you for the kind words, Mel. I agree, our styles of writing are very similar. We should collaborate sometime! :)
Date: 5/3/2014 9:31:00 PM
Kelly What a sweet and beautiful write. Full of passion and care that flows so nicely. Thank you for the nice comment on my Poetry poem.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/5/2014 1:04:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comments, as well, Robin. I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. It was a fun one to write! :)
Date: 4/26/2014 11:03:00 PM
I just loved this one!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/28/2014 6:01:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur. I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 4/26/2014 8:20:00 PM
The chemistry of the soul so well described. Instant attraction must be some sort of cosmic magnetic phenomena. Well done L)
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/28/2014 5:43:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comments, Karen. It is nice to see you back again! :)
Date: 4/26/2014 4:49:00 AM
Very apt chemistry of love, kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/27/2014 2:46:00 PM
Thank you very much, Dr. Ram.

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