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Cheeky Falcon

frontal nudity she leapt from the highest cliff falcon fancied top Poetry Contest submission: Make Me Chuckle With A Haiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2015 8:41:00 PM

The title was good for this!! Congrats in the contest, Kimberly

Kim Shaw
Date: 8/26/2015 6:14:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! I hope you are having a great summer. xo

Skat A

Date: 7/31/2015 1:30:00 PM

KIMBERLY, Congrats on your win. SKAT

Kim Shaw
Date: 8/26/2015 6:12:00 PM

Hi Skat! Thank you for the kind words. xo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 10:54:00 PM

Congrats on ur brilliant winning haiku Kimberly! Great work!

Kim Shaw
Date: 8/26/2015 6:11:00 PM

Thank you for your kind congratulations. Much appreciated. xo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2015 2:45:00 PM

Kimberly :), Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my giggle haiku contest. I enjoyed reading every entry placed on the winning list. Stop by my latest blog "MY CAT" if you'd like or have the time. Yours Truly! ~LINDA~

Kim Shaw
Date: 8/26/2015 6:09:00 PM

What a nice surprise, Linda! I'm happy that you enjoyed my silly haiku. Thank you for the kind comment and placing in your contest. Love, Kimberly xo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2015 12:50:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/9/2015 1:28:00 PM

Hi Sara, thank you so much for the encouragement and good wishes! Have a lovely day Hugs, Kimberly

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/8/2015 7:30:00 PM

Hi Kimberly! You have a sharp, funny haiku here! GL in the contest, too! :)

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/8/2015 7:44:00 PM

Hi Laura! Thank you for the sweet comments :) Hugs, Kimberly xx

John Lawless

Date: 3/8/2015 3:38:00 PM

as long as there are no tan lines the other falcons won't notice. Cute with a tart tinge.

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/8/2015 7:52:00 PM

I made a slight edit to clarify the owner of the swim top, lol. Thank you, John!

Kim Shaw
Date: 3/8/2015 6:07:00 PM

Hahaha...I see your point, John. It was a woman jumping, lol.