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Check the seats

Check all the seats in the front of the bus. Check every seat, and don't make a fuss. Check the back seats and the front ones. Check all the seats for lost daughters and sons. Check under the seats when the day has ended. Check on the seats, don't leave any children unattended.

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Date: 4/22/2024 11:20:00 AM
Excellent poem! What helps better than repetition? Great style choice and fun read - congrats on the win!
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Rose Crocus
Date: 4/23/2024 4:55:00 AM
Thank you! :D
Date: 4/21/2024 3:59:00 PM
Crystal clear instructions on how to do a proper child search on a bus like mine. Oh yes, I am the monitor, not the driver. Congratulations on your win in my contest.
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Rose Crocus
Date: 4/22/2024 4:56:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 4/13/2024 5:56:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on "Checking Seats" through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Rose Crocus
Date: 4/23/2024 4:55:00 AM
Thank you ( •` u •´ )

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