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Check Mate

Go ahead and make the first move, but take care One or two spaces so I can move to my square Game of life, I’m queen defending my king Pawns, so many seem such insignificant a thing I’ll stay in my castle with my bishop for a lil while As my knights ride to fight the enemy in style I’ll rush about you see when my king Is in need Watch for your next move, hope I don’t misread Sacrificing so many pieces attempting to defend Not a game it’s so real, you see I won’t pretend Soon the enemy will deplete my trusted army As they attempt to not let anyone harm me My role important, my moves so unrestricted Game of chance while their moves I’ve predicted I hate losing pieces but it’s for me the Queen End goal is to sit beside my king ruling supreme I’m very loyal down to the very end, I will fight Even when I watch fall my last trusted knight Each piece to the end will fight so valiantly Dying a noble death against those who challenge me I must keep my kingdom from being overthrown A mind game challenging so many great unknowns Hoping my king is truly the one, and its fate Because if not...it’s games over, check mate
10/2020

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Date: 12/20/2020 10:35:00 PM
superb the game of love and sacrifice; beautifully penned the poem is; enjoyable
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Date: 12/8/2020 8:52:00 PM
Brenda, Utterly fascinating to find this souffle' in life's game of chance on my plate today. Left my palate with new flavors discovered. Tastefully done poet. -Richard
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/9/2020 2:49:00 AM
Richard thank you! And you kind sir have made my day also!;)
Date: 12/1/2020 1:47:00 PM
The Queen rocks... but must chose her moves wisely ;) Awesomeness Brenda
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 12/9/2020 2:48:00 AM
Thank FJ I appreciate the read and comments!’;)
Date: 11/26/2020 5:53:00 AM
This is a 'game' of love and sacrifice, Brenda, eventually leading to the ultimate desired result. ~ Hope you are keeping well and safe:) Warm regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/28/2020 5:01:00 PM
Yes paul seems love can be just a game but the sacrifices are so real! Thank you!:)
Date: 11/24/2020 12:05:00 AM
WoW!!! I loved the chess imagery, and the purposeful motif of this challenging game, Brenda. Your quill skillz are honeycomb filled w/passion. LOVE everything about this poem. Smiles and smiles of joy forever.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/25/2020 5:24:00 AM
Thank you Freddie you have always been kind to me! I appreciate the read and love the comment!:)
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/24/2020 12:08:00 AM
Btw ... pawns are the faithful drones who soldier on. Laying down their life for others is the most sacred sacrifice. Love and more love always.
Date: 11/14/2020 3:05:00 PM
I have to disagree, somewhat, with Silent One here: pawns are used to break open closed positions...major pieces are sacrificed for strong attacking chances...and all prepared to die for the queen of course. Superbly penned, Poetess...but, of course -- you always were the "Queen of Rap!" Really did enjoy this one, Brenda. :) john P.s no one does rap like you do...and I mean -- nobody!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/14/2020 3:35:00 PM
Ahhh John there you are! You have been missed my dear!:) and thank you John you always have been able to bring a smile to my face! ;)
Date: 10/27/2020 7:21:00 AM
I think you need to learn how to play chess properly lol... nice poem.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/27/2020 12:57:00 PM
I know how to play the game but I changed up a bit because metaphorically speaking! Lmao! Yea I know they try to protect the queen but hey sounded better like that:) Lmmfao!
Date: 10/26/2020 5:02:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem, dear lady. It's a inspiration indeed and so very well done. God bless you always
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/26/2020 10:57:00 PM
Thank you Regina! Much appreciated!:)

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