Chasms

It opens for you- I have opened for you Again and again slit Tettering between made love and maddening guilt With a slight touch you pierce Beaming and cutting through me bit by bit Something staggering on the paranormal between us exists Something that can't be defined, categorized or resembling anything ever spoken of or lived Though somehow it's daggered and chipped By our many tears and trysts Though heart bears a hunger The mind divided and split Opening over and over again- I've opened over and over again Disasterously my love for you is spent Shrouded in mystery and an unmoving emptiness Meanwhile the flies have swarmed Latching onto the darkness overgrown Suffering in silence- Opening myself for you no more.

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Margherita Russo

Date: 1/29/2013 3:17:00 PM

Very good poem poet. Can you read my poem.

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/27/2013 3:41:00 PM

This is amazing my dear Bianca. You write with such deep passion and mystery. I am very IMPRESSED! Your descriptive passage are creatively written... you have a style all your own! I am happy to call you my new friend. Until we talk again, love and big hugs, Jack xox

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 1/26/2013 2:15:00 PM

"Meanwhile the flies have swarmed Latching onto the darkness overgrown" There is something deep and dynamic about the way you describe the love that is not only shrouded in emptiness but is also"spent" as well.