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Chasing Secrets

In shadowed halls, I've followed the quiet threads of power,   Charting each muffled cry, its subtle sway in time,  Silently navigating the veiled histories held in their gaze.   Indeed, the world is more than a stage for veiled hands,   And the moon a silent sentinel of their secret rites,  In hidden rooms, the sacred vow shifts to silent betrayal.   I turn not to the relics of old secrets worn thin,   Nor seek the stark truths in ruins of ancient bonds.   Shadows are draped like promises, speaking of deeper dawns.   I've roamed the archives under the quiet moon's watch,   Untangling the snarled webs of alliances that bind.   Yet, they hold fast.   Sometimes, I long for the veils to be drawn back completely.   In the quiet corridors, triumphs speak their tales;   The secret heart pulses with the rhythms of old truths.  

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Date: 4/18/2024 8:06:00 PM
You have helped me traverse the secret corridors of power, Don. Such powerful stanzas you've written with such haunting imagery. Bravo, Gershon
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/19/2024 4:29:00 AM
Gershon, The Medieval Days of yore and today we have the Evil Days du jour! Cheers, Don
Date: 4/18/2024 9:13:00 AM
I felt like I was on a bit of an intriguing and mystical journey into secret rooms and quiet corridors. I liked this metaphor: Shadows are draped like promises, speaking of deeper dawns Like you, I long for the veils to be drawn back completely...truth has lost its way in today's world. Faving this one...have a wonderful day, Sara
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/18/2024 10:15:00 AM
Hi Sara, thank you so much. The poem does have that feel indeed. Often I ask myself: What is the truth? Universal truth has is lost in the postmodern world of literature and otherwise in society. Personal truth is within easier grasp. It is increasingly important for all of us to work very hard at understanding that personal truths are often very divergent and under partisan lights, truth is reduced to either/or. Sad.
Date: 4/18/2024 5:09:00 AM
Intriguing Don, reminds me a bit of the Davinci Code. Who knows what goes on behind closed doors?
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Don Iannone
Date: 4/18/2024 5:28:00 AM
That is exactly what prompted the poem. I wrote this back in 2004. Very astute, Tom. Thanks. Don

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