Get Your Premium Membership

Chasing Friendship

We could have been real close you know If you'd given me one chance. I wanted to share so much with you Most of all, to be your friend. I came across the ocean to be here with your son Left family, friends and all I knew Just because I was in love. The first time that you met me Your mind you had made up That this girl was the wrong one And will never, be good enough. When I was all excited, Wanting to share my joy You just would sneer and turn away Each time it broke my heart in two. Do you have any idea what you did to me? All those years cold hearted and proud And telling tales behind my back I'm glad they all knew me better than that. I so longed for a mother Mine, too far away. We could have been the best of friends If only, yes if only. Now Anna on the day you died I sat and hummed you peaceful songs To help you on your way And as you took your last breath I was there being a friend That's all I ever wanted to be. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 09.10.2014 For Regina Riddle's contest Rejection 2nd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/12/2014 9:22:00 PM
Brenda that's a sweet emotive and heartfelt write! Congrats on ur big win!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2014 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Regina's contest. God bless -JT
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2014 10:42:00 AM
Hi Brenda, a heartfelt write, Congratulations, with your awesome rejection poem.... LOVE LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2014 9:53:00 AM
Moving and touchy write, congrats, Brenda
Login to Reply
Date: 9/12/2014 3:47:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/11/2014 11:01:00 PM
Congratulations on the win and I can relate to your poem so much. Thank you so much for entering. Love and prayers and God bless you, Gina
Login to Reply
Meier-Hans Avatar
Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/13/2014 8:12:00 PM
Thank you Regina
Date: 9/10/2014 8:05:00 PM
Great write, Brenda. Best wishes in the contest.
Login to Reply
Meier-Hans Avatar
Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/13/2014 8:11:00 PM
Thank you Faye
Date: 9/10/2014 2:04:00 PM
- Oh, dear Brenda - this gives me tears on my cheeks - heartbreakingly beautiful poem - Good luck in the contest (I think it must be a winning poem) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Meier-Hans Avatar
Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/10/2014 5:39:00 PM
I'm so glad you stopped by Anne Lise
Date: 9/10/2014 2:02:00 PM
Wow...moving, sad and superbly honest.
Login to Reply
Meier-Hans Avatar
Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/10/2014 5:36:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by.
Date: 9/10/2014 1:18:00 PM
A heartbreaking emotional poem Brenda I hope this does well with you in the contest- its a 7 from me! I split up with my ex all because of his mother I simply wasn't good enough in her eyes so I can relate to this! Hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Meier-Hans Avatar
Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/10/2014 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Jan. I can imagine many women can relate well to this poem. I cried writing it because it was so emotional for me.
Date: 9/10/2014 12:49:00 PM
This is a heart breaking poem-so well written, you stayed true to be a friend to the end is what should matter most-great person of character. Cheers!
Login to Reply
Meier-Hans Avatar
Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 9/10/2014 12:54:00 PM
I hope she knows now.

Book: Shattered Sighs