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Chasing Colors

I -- Stopped to chat: at the one store open This second day of 2023 here: Where a month from mid- December Is the usual "holiday" for child & worker -- Mr. L saw me rush off chasing something This new time had crimson skies, painting I had not ever seen. Walked a mile Down near the darkening sky, westward And back as crimson faded into lines Of orange, parallel lines; spruces behind Greater pines behind in art in two colors Blue background, crimson lines and forests II The darkening blue skies swallowed, gently Bit by bit, the crimson that made me run Down the hill, Kerk St., Adelaide, and back To enjoy the gentler breeze at 8-0-clock And dream of the vision of hope, I saw From the Hand that might have made me

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Date: 2/8/2023 5:28:00 AM
Thanks sweet angels. U know who you are! And silent Angelles, too. Shalom shalom
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Date: 1/24/2023 1:39:00 AM
Hello Anil. Hi. Yes, I always see beauty in everything, however, I truly see and envision the beauty and moment of the scene of your entry and how with elegance you placed that moment into words. I believe you did see the hand that made you. Yes, yes and yes, how could you not with such an extraordinary encounter. As always, thank you for sharing. As always, Shalom Shalom Nasmaste Namaste. May this day find you well and safe. Love and Blessings always. Happy New Year.
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Date: 1/9/2023 12:55:00 PM
A wonderful/colorful write. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 1/2/2023 6:30:00 PM
It is summer, eh? Anil, I put you in my quotes, in case you lose the internet over there! You are the third one down from the top....Happy New Year! XO ~Anaya
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Date: 1/2/2023 7:40:00 PM
Good morning, here, after 5 am & Yes, summer. Not as humid as Eastern USA. Thanx always Anaya. You're totally immersed & invested in PS, & know all the backroads & highways here. What a nice idea: quoting your fellow poets in your profile. You amaze me. Shalom shalom, Anil

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