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Chasing a Reflection

I have walked down roads unseen.. Always searching for a glimpse.. Maybe a peek into me.. But always too shy.. ~~ A crystal ball without light.. Showing me the same figure.. A man in black looking down.. To a boy in dreams.. ~~ At the end of the road, peace.. The boy now a man not lost.. The reflection in black seen.. It was always me.. By Michael J Falotico for Linda's "Crystal Ball Contest

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Francine Roberts

Date: 9/22/2011 10:31:00 PM

Loved it the first time I read it, congrats on your first place win in the contest Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2011 4:10:00 PM

Congrats on your win...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/20/2011 10:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Michael. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2011 12:06:00 AM

michael.. this is a real topper, so unhibited and flawless...heartfelt congrats on your award winning treasure… huggs!

John Freeman

Date: 9/19/2011 1:25:00 PM

Michael, Quite a revealing crystal ball you have there. Great to see a first place win for you. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2011 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Linda, Michael

Cory Long

Date: 9/19/2011 8:07:00 AM

congrats on your win..cory

David Williams

Date: 9/19/2011 3:19:00 AM

Michael a fantastic introspective journey, congrats on your well deserved win my friend..David

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/19/2011 12:54:00 AM

Great write Michael. Congrats on your 1st place win.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/18/2011 11:33:00 PM

Hooray, dear friend! Big Congrats to you! imaginative and creative writing. :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/18/2011 11:05:00 PM

Congratulations on a truly great poem and win. Love, Joyce

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/18/2011 10:45:00 PM

Well done Michael and congratulations on your first place win. Haunting poem. lee

Constance La France

Date: 9/18/2011 9:52:00 PM

My compliments on a beautiful poem and congratulations on your first place win in Linda's contest ~~

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/18/2011 9:16:00 PM

Michael. You wrote a wonderful entry for this contest. This man in black looking down is fabulous imagery and gave your piece amazing structure. Congrats on this crystal! Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2011 9:11:00 PM

CONGRATS MICHAEL ON FIRST PLACE WIN WITH THIS MESMERIZING PIECE LUV.. XOXO..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/6/2011 6:18:00 PM

I can understand that perfectly Michael. You put it oh so well. I haven't checked out any contests of late but this certainly should do well. Good luck

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/6/2011 11:23:00 AM

Very interesting, Michael. I like the concept of the man who looked his younger self. Well written :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/6/2011 10:12:00 AM

Well this sure is a very unique way of looking into that crystal ball, Michael -- and I really like that in the end you say you are not lost--- I maybe wrong, I believe that is peek... I am sure Linda will love this one :) Hope you had a great weekend! hugs your way, Michael :D

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/5/2011 12:49:00 PM

a way of light to knowing who you really are, its amazing when we go through a change like this.everything you were before was just a gate way. great meaning Michael(: ~Always&Forever

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2011 12:10:00 PM

APPRECIATE U SUPPORTING MY CURRENT CONTEST MICHAEL LUV..GOOD LUCK..KNOW THESE WORDS WILL FOG UP MY CRYSTAL BALL ..THANKXX FOR THE ENTRY LUV..J.G. ALWAYS AND FOREVER ...XOXO..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2011 11:56:00 AM

Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..The man or woman and the child are intermixed...Enjoyed the topic..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/4/2011 3:27:00 PM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Michael luv.. good luck... am sure will be flying high reading your words at judging time luv. J.G. in contest mode ..oh ..xoxo...

Cory Long

Date: 9/4/2011 12:02:00 PM

this was great nicely penned Love it! good luck in the contest cory

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/4/2011 11:51:00 AM

Stunning entry, enjoyed the introspection Mr. F.. All the best for the contest Michael.. Love W

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/4/2011 11:32:00 AM

awesome entry for the contest Michael , best of luck