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Chased By the Dawn

In the downy-soft hours, where dawn hovers near, Night's uncovered dream, must disappear. Once, delivered, then replaced, Never to be traced, Drifting on, Chased, By the dawn. Fantasies misplaced, Become silver clouds, erased. Lost in forever, quite far from here, In the downy-soft hours, where dawn hovers near
===================== 2//13/15 Inspired By Andrea's Contest: "An Invented Form"

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Date: 10/2/2015 9:31:00 PM
Hey, Carrie, I am going to do another contest on Andaree poetry. I recall you won my first contest. I have a new model poem to show everyone but also I would like permission to use your poem here as a second example for members to see how to do the form right. May I have permission to use it on my contest page tomorrow. Please let me know right away. Thanks!!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 10/3/2015 9:30:00 AM
I would be honored to have you use my poem, Andrea. I'm sorry that I didn't see your message sooner. Hope I got back to you in enough time! Thanks for asking !!
Date: 2/27/2015 10:53:00 PM
Nice win Carrie..SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2015 12:28:00 AM
Fantastic work Carrie! Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 2/23/2015 5:03:00 PM
Well done Carrie, congrats on the top spot.
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:15:00 PM
Carrie, I love how used this new form to create such a wonderful image of the fading night chased away by dawn. Absolutely beautiful! Congratulations on your First Place win! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/23/2015 2:37:00 PM
Carrrie, congrats on taking first.
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Date: 2/23/2015 1:58:00 PM
Wonderful invente write, Carrie, congratulations on your win. 7 Blessings dear friend
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Date: 2/23/2015 11:03:00 AM
Very Nice. Liked "Night's uncovered dream". No wonder you are at the top!
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Date: 2/23/2015 9:50:00 AM
A magnificent write you have there! They look like two pyramids merging together! Showers of applause to your WIN Carrie!
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:47:00 AM
It is a deserved win..souper topper Carrie
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Nice job on a new form!
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Date: 2/23/2015 6:59:00 AM
Beautiful, congratulations.
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Date: 2/23/2015 4:30:00 AM
I LOOOOVE THIS POEM!!! CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!!!!
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Date: 2/23/2015 1:46:00 AM
Many congrats Carrie an outstanding poem:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 2/23/2015 12:09:00 AM
oh boy, freddie is gonna be after me again. But I can't help it. this was my favorite of the bunch. What else can i say!!! I actually thought this was gonna be from nette!!! it looked like her style too! Congrats to you, Carrie.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/23/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea !! And I love your reply here.........and Jan's response...... !!! That made my day !! Thanks so much for the honor of trying something new!
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/23/2015 1:46:00 AM
Don't worry Andrea dead men cannot speak:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 2/14/2015 4:57:00 PM
Fabulous Carrie...I really enjoyed this...C--->A
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Date: 2/14/2015 12:49:00 PM
You have painted a picture with words that inspire and captivate the reader. Well done. Emile. #7
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