Chase Event

Lofty chase event Lays back to exhausted goal Never sees ending Russell Sivey

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/30/2012 3:40:00 PM

We run around in circles most of the time, Russell. I'd like to find a man, but if he "chased" me, I'd probably run away. Thank you for enlightening me, Russell. There's a lot more to this senryu than can be seen on the surface. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2012 2:05:00 PM

so true of humanity's race Russell.. every line denotes another phase of the chase luv.. like the second one especially .. brilliant expressions today luv..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/30/2012 1:01:00 PM

Well done Russell.- Have a lovely weekend to you. - oxox Anne-Lise

Don Johnson

Date: 3/30/2012 2:19:00 AM

great senyru Russell mate, keep em coming through the gate:)

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/29/2012 11:11:00 PM

How often we seems so true to life Russell...you've captured so much with your Senryu...Bravo...BigHuggsss,love~deb

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/29/2012 11:13:00 PM

typo Russell...'it seems' not 'we seems' sorry...lol it's late here...I've enjoyed reading your poems tonight...I shall come again and read more...big huggsss,love~deb