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Chartreuse

Pleiades Coax me with c a r e s s e s- Color me chromatic… Champagne and fine dining cure my calamities. Cast aside life’s spent cares- Cover me in c h a r t r e u s e Calla Lilies…tonight. Letter used: C 7 lines total 6 syllables in each line Date Written: August 23, 2016

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/26/2016 10:48:00 AM

Congrats on your 1st place! :D Sunita

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:32:00 PM

thank you sweet Sunita :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/26/2016 7:52:00 AM

Congrats Laura, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:31:00 PM

thank you kind Teddy :)-luloo

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 8/26/2016 7:14:00 AM

Huge Congrats,Laura!

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:31:00 PM

thank you Sushma :)-luloo

Afzal Nusker

Date: 8/26/2016 4:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Laura.

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:31:00 PM

many thanks Afzal :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2016 3:51:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poems, Laura - hugs and :)

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:30:00 PM

thank you sweet Anne-Lise :)-luloo

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/26/2016 3:00:00 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations. And I learnt what chartreuse means. lots of wishes, Kai

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:30:00 PM

thank you Kai :) when I learned it, I fell in love with it, It's so elegant :)-luloo

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/26/2016 12:24:00 AM

This is truly lovely, Laura, and a worthy topster. Congratulations! Viv x

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:29:00 PM

thank you Viv :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/25/2016 9:07:00 PM

Back to say I am so happy to see your poem take first place luloo! Big congrats on your special win! 7 ; )

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:29:00 PM

many thanks sweet Connie :)-luloo

Rick Parise

Date: 8/25/2016 8:33:00 PM

NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 4:28:00 PM

thank you dear Rick :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2016 7:35:00 PM

ahhh, a big winner I see. I remember it so well. a BIG congrats to you.

Lu Loo
Date: 8/26/2016 11:08:00 AM

thank you Andrea :)-luloo

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/25/2016 6:22:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your First Place win in the 'Pleiades C' contest! Such romantic and relaxing imagery! Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo
Date: 8/25/2016 6:50:00 PM

thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo

Joseph May

Date: 8/25/2016 5:25:00 PM

Congrats on topping the list Luloo

Lu Loo
Date: 8/25/2016 5:31:00 PM

many thanks Joseph :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 8/25/2016 5:02:00 PM

Well done Laura!! You wowed me straight away with this creative poem. I am pleased to come back with congratulations:) Honoured to be sharing top place with you:) Regards // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 8/26/2016 10:29:00 AM

You are kind and sweet, Laura:) Thank you!

Lu Loo
Date: 8/25/2016 5:09:00 PM

thank you sweet man! You are so adored by me and many others...congrats to you also! :)-luloo