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Chaos

what are you living for is it that girl again is she really that one your only lets get real don't laugh it off don't let your dreams carry you away from where the truth really lies where it really hurts don't confess your darkest secrets to me don't send me off into the world unknowing and naive of its malice the no's surrounds us all... pulling us in... closer tighter, tranquility and stars skin breathes skin, pores mere holes to the underneath is it that girl again why does she always show up at the worst times she took it from you, didn't she stole right from you and you let her and you let her do it over and over again the hits, the burning, the outrages, the hangings where are you are you hiding in the closet what about the bathroom that right there you are wrapped up in a towel blood stained and forlorn my friend my friend where have you gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/11/2011 2:11:00 PM
Very creative work..Congratulations on going through the first round...Sara
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Date: 3/9/2011 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Kevin. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Kevin. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your piece of art being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your instrospective piece being featured on the Soup this week! And thank you for your kind comments on my poems! Great write! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/20/2010 12:16:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 1/19/2010 8:31:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece, congrats on your well deserved feature. keep writing. Your poetry friend Adeleke
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Date: 1/19/2010 3:19:00 AM
Very emotional outpouring of introspection. Thank you for sharing, Kevin. Lainie
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Date: 1/18/2010 12:56:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 1/18/2010 3:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kevin. I hope you have many more. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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