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Changing of Seasons

everything and everyone seems to be in motion everyone but me seasons change, days turn into months,people age but I stand still, unaffected the only time I feel alive, the only time I thrive is when most would rather be still when the cold creeps in I come alive!

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Skat A

Date: 11/18/2015 11:32:00 AM

Awesome write. SKAT

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/14/2014 6:03:00 PM

Mighty pen mwaba! the only time I feel alive, the only time I thrive is when most would rather be still when the cold creeps in I come alive!- Many can relate to the cold weather something about it that makes us feel like well, we can feel the chill in our bones. lol.. The last line is the most powerful of all the lines dear friend. I love it ! A 7 for you! I wish you a very Merry Christmas to you and yours! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Lomnthunzi Kalonge
Date: 12/15/2014 10:28:00 AM

thanks for reading and commenting. merry Christmas to you too!!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/14/2014 5:17:00 PM

Good write, a dark poem, Mwaba. Blessings and Merry Christmas

Lomnthunzi Kalonge
Date: 12/14/2014 5:18:00 PM

thanks, same to u