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Changing Faces

"Changing Faces" she stole my beau in Italy when we were both quite young, a flower 'twas waiting to bloom; a love song left unsung, she weaved her magic spell on him with her soft feminine wiles, her grand manipulation proved a master of disguise in smiles, she selfishly thought of herself and crushed my broken heart, in Italy, we had laughed and cried and suddenly grew apart, throughout those years I wanted to return for sweet revenge, because my first love was my life; I wished hers to unhinge, instead, I wrote a little note, sent with a basket of cheer, remember KARMA comes around; kiss my petunia, dear. startled, she picked up the phone to thank me for the gift, she now was a changed woman, who understood how swift the hand of Fate; passing of Time, can instill in a heart, compassion and forgiveness as maturity did start she offered invitation to visit our old stomping grounds, burying the hatchet among familiar sights and sounds, she was an excellent hostess, who cherished me as a friend, her beautiful persona moved me to make amends, so once a year we meet in love, enjoying family, for nothing can replace a true friendship's harmony. *For Vienna's Let Me Have It .. then Kiss My Petunia eeContest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/13/2014 2:31:00 AM
love this one... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/7/2012 12:01:00 AM
Your entry was awesome, Linda. Big congrats in the contest!!
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:20:00 AM
HI LINDA MY SWEET BFF,,, , congratulations in Vienna Bombardieri "Let me have it then kiss my petunia" INTERESTING contest... TAKE CARE :-) Love PD. ..... thank you for my birthday wishes.. I will celebrate my birthday this October 7th... xox~ pd
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:53:00 AM
won 2nd place .. thankxxx
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Date: 10/5/2012 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Vienna's contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 4:27:00 AM
Another wonderful win for you Linda with this beauty. Big Congrats and hugs.
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Date: 10/1/2012 2:38:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this poem!
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Date: 9/14/2012 3:57:00 PM
Remarkable write...I enjoyed reading this immensely! Hugs
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Date: 9/13/2012 10:18:00 PM
I love the rhyme. I especially love your euphemism "kiss my petunia" so clever. Love your poem
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Date: 9/12/2012 10:32:00 PM
An out standing write for a super win.. best wishes Linda for this contest and Thanks a lot for visiting and your sweet comments.
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Date: 9/12/2012 7:20:00 AM
The last line is challenging line concluded with few words. I think in the same way. Good luck. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/11/2012 9:57:00 PM
wow, Linda, you did outstandingly with this theme. you made it into a story. how wonderful.
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Date: 9/11/2012 8:42:00 AM
Oh Sweetheart, this just gets better and better, your such an inspiration, a true Goddess of poetry, a person one day i would love to meet!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:04:00 PM
Linda, my sweet Bff... thank you so much for your lovely visit. your poem really hits... good luck in the contest..xox~pd
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Date: 9/10/2012 5:58:00 PM
Nice and beautiful piece,Linda..most suitable for the contest...Winning hugs to you,great friend...Bravo...
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Date: 9/10/2012 12:55:00 PM
i enjoyed how you kicked then kissed this piece with your interesting story, sweets.. it's a wonder how you can place yourself in such extremes and write with such ease... wowie win for me! ..:) huggs!
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Date: 9/10/2012 12:18:00 PM
You've done a masterful job with this magnificent write my friend! I truly love the way you approached the contest Linda-Marie...I've been debating on how to do this contest, I'm just not a mean person so I would have a hard time letting her have it! So I've put this one off for fear of hurting her feelings...and hurting my own in doing so! Well, I believe you've accomplished her wishes quite well with this perfect poem! This is a wondrous write, one that will do well in the contest! Great Work!
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Date: 9/10/2012 11:00:00 AM
A perfect entry for Vie's contest, Linda-Marie! I, too, decided I could not let Vie have it. She's too sweet! I probably won't enter her contest unless I come up with another way. Yours is brilliant! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 9/10/2012 10:53:00 AM
You always have something "in wait" or is it "thinking hat" you put on. Like this very much Linda-Marie - Good luck in the contest for you. Good friends are irreplaceable - - Have a exciting NEW week. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:58:00 AM
posting 2nd half shortly .. a tough contest as Vie is a sweet lady to write nasty lines about so thought this love rivalry would be cute .. enjoy poets ..luv
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:58:00 AM
ha! very sweet revenge, indeed! i hope she got what she deserved. excellent poem!
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