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A melancholy feeling flutters in my heart As raindrops fall gently to nourish my thoughts As one season arrives and another departs In a whirlwind of emotions I am now caught As mother nature changes her mood Let raindrops fall gently to nourish my thoughts My disposition changes as I sit and brood wondering why summer must leave us so soon As mother nature changes her mood Autumn unwraps itself like a butterfly from a cocoon And then its beautiful leaves flutter away And I keep wondering why summer must leave us so soon The cool winds of Autumn will soon rule the day And the brightly clothed trees will then undress And their beautiful leaves will flutter away In each season these trees will impress As a melancholy feeling flutters in my heart Soon, these brightly clothed trees will slowly undress As one season arrives and another departs ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 9/17/2014 5:28:00 PM
many congratulations Joesph - i have never seen this form before:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2014 7:40:00 AM
Very well done with this form Joseph. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/17/2014 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations, Joseph
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Date: 9/17/2014 4:30:00 AM
- Congrats on your 4th place,Joseph - A poem which I liked very much - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/16/2014 8:59:00 PM
Yes, our moods do seem to change with the seasons.... There are some interesting metaphors in this very expressive write. Great work, Joseph! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/29/2014 5:10:00 PM
Hi Joseph, thanks for supporting my one WORD title contest. Enjoy the win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/18/2013 2:07:00 PM
Joseph, ......congrats...... luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/14/2013 12:44:00 PM
I love as mother nature changes her mood..great poem Joseph...congratulations
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:28:00 AM
you have crafted a lovely poem from that line...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:29:00 PM
Hi Joseph, --A beautiful poem and line... congratulations :-)...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Joseph xx
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Joseph
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Date: 9/13/2013 8:45:00 AM
I really love this form and you wrote it so well. Congratulations Joseph. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/13/2013 12:40:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest Richard...
Date: 8/30/2013 9:59:00 AM
YOu really are coming through with your terzanelles. Well, maybe Sapphic stanza is hard, but you are mastering this form right here!! You chose a lovely line to use of Becca's and I hope this one does well in the contest.
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Joseph May
Date: 8/30/2013 12:46:00 PM
thank you Andrea...yes the line has great emotional effect...
Date: 8/29/2013 8:54:00 AM
Joseph, it's a good poem... good luck in the contest... Linda
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Joseph May
Date: 8/29/2013 11:01:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 8/29/2013 7:33:00 AM
- A great way to welcome autumn - Good luck in the contest, Joseph! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 8/29/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Anne

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