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~~~~~~ ^_^ *_* ~~~~~~ " I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming . . . " Born to crawl at the ground nestled with grass and stones Under-estimated to be just a simple legged-insect To be at veneer, an engrossed delightful ala will come and appear from my side Taught to possess allured chromatic colour - enrapturing fragrant pigments Enchanting being came from within - from nowhere inside Real captivating metamorphosis took place - wholly changed for the best Fascinating dreams, daydreams and reality flow with the ticking of the clock Living - giving its elegant splendid paint for the very last fall of petals in her home Yelling...shouting - now an entrancing BUTTERFLY dreaming to be a HUMAN OF CHANGE " Nothing's permanent except CHANGES...Practice makes not perfect but the permanence of CHANGES. . . " ~~~~~ ^_^ *_* ~~~~~ ======================================= Jun-jun Villanueva Daydreams and dreams and dreams CONTEST July 9,2011

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Date: 7/18/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations Jun-Jun on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/17/2011 4:04:00 AM
Wow you are really conquering this form! Light & Love
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:19:00 PM
I remember reading this. congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:22:00 PM
Very unique approach Jun-Jun. Many congrats on your super win, Lainie
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:27:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on your great big win in daydreaming contest with this first class poetry luv.. enjoy another wow win...oh..
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:00:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, jun-jun
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Date: 7/11/2011 6:02:00 AM
I've always wondered if animals & insects could dream, so I really like your take on this butterfly dream. Very creative.
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Date: 7/9/2011 11:56:00 PM
Beautiful Acrostic, Jun-Jun. Lainie
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Date: 7/9/2011 10:04:00 PM
Very awesome write. I can tell when I'm in the presence of a master, and you my friend have got it. Thanks for the comments on " I put them in a Box" I plan to read into your work soon. With care, Jay
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Date: 7/9/2011 6:24:00 AM
What a wonderful poem to read on an early Saturday morning Jun-Jun. Hope you are enjoying your weekend and that your are finding much inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2011 7:33:00 PM
wonderful approach to do the contest.Nice Acrostic here.Best wishes.
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