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Nine feet tall now Very slim mysterious Dark cloud covers sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/29/2009 3:06:00 AM
A very vivid and somehow mysterious Haiku...well-written.. Always, Farah
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Date: 8/28/2009 7:04:00 PM
This poem is quite mysterious as well. I don't think the cloud is the nine feet tall structure. I think whatever it is is making the sun get covered by the dark cloud the way you see in the movies when something really ominous and bad is approaching, then rain starts pouring and lightning and thunder soon follow. Whatever this nine foot tall thing is, I don't think it spells good news...very compelling Sara. -Yoni
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