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Change of Summer To Autumn

The summer sky glows green and hot bustling with life It’s early September and summer is coming to a close Shortening days have arrived with Autumn’s change Windy, rainy, wet days have caused the leaves to fall The shedding leaves are brilliant vivid colors of red, orange, and brown Days of hard work from dusk until dawn bring A successful abundant harvest as summer closes Gracefully falling glistening light snow Brings sweet fresh, clean crisp air Settling on rooftops and window seals, Dusting the tree limbs with its white powdery snow Ushering in the start of falling winter temperatures With white crystalline hoarfrost fringes on roofs and ledges Trembling cold children play with joy and laughter Shivering and shaping snowmen and snow angels with icy fingers A magical world of fun running, slipping and sliding As snow falls, so does the sun and the day is done
9/26/2015 Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton Contest Name: Seasonal

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Date: 12/12/2015 5:25:00 PM
Nice poem Eve. You wrote beautifully.
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Date: 9/30/2015 11:15:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 9/30/2015 6:05:00 PM
Skat, thank you so very much for your compliment and support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/30/2015 11:04:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/30/2015 6:06:00 PM
Sara,thank you so very much for your compliment and support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/30/2015 12:23:00 AM
My favorite lines were how delightfully you ended this lovely poem. Congratulations on a fine win Eve! #7
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Date: 9/30/2015 6:06:00 PM
Connie, thank you so very much for your compliment and support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/29/2015 11:49:00 PM
Lovely poem Eve, full of wonderful images! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/30/2015 6:06:00 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma , thank you so very much for your compliment and support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/29/2015 10:50:00 PM
Lovely, Eve! Congratulations Janice
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2015 11:05:00 PM
Thank you, Janice, for you congratulations hugs Eve
Date: 9/29/2015 7:21:00 PM
Nice win Eve!
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Date: 9/29/2015 11:06:00 PM
Thank you, Michael, for you great support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/29/2015 7:14:00 PM
great pen Eve congrats on placing hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2015 11:06:00 PM
Shadow, thank you so much for placing my poem in the contest. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/29/2015 6:56:00 PM
This is so outstanding, Eve! Your talent clearly shines as you weave your lovely words together so beautifully! If this does not go to the top of the contest heap, I will be surprised! A 7 from me :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2015 11:07:00 PM
Laura, thank you so very much for your compliments and your support. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/29/2015 6:04:00 PM
Beautifully written, Eve. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/29/2015 6:51:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your compliment and the congratulations, Sandra. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/29/2015 4:32:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/29/2015 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your congratulations, Jan. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/27/2015 10:19:00 PM
Superb imagery and great flow. I am no big fan of winter myself but this poem was a delight to read. A7 and good luck in that contest.
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Date: 9/29/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your compliment and your 7, Robert. Hugs Eve
Date: 9/26/2015 11:33:00 PM
You describe the seasonal changes wonderfully Eve. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/26/2015 10:02:00 PM
Dear Eve Although I am not a winter fan at all the picture of the children playing in the snow is quite beautiful, wondeful imagery,love the harvest as summer closes part also, over all it's a lovely poem about the seasonal change, inspirational and elegant, tonight I will have dreams about this piece, thank you for the inspiration, cheri
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/29/2015 11:08:00 PM
Cheryl, I feel honored by your compliments from a terrific writer that you are. Thank you so very much hugs Eve
Date: 9/26/2015 6:16:00 PM
Absolutely delightful imagery Eve you have woven the words in so brilliantly - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/26/2015 6:28:00 PM
I've barely written in a week Eve or been on the site - it is very lack luster at the moment:-( hope to pick up next week:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/26/2015 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jan, I'm starting to run dry. Hugs Eve

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