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Change of Season

CHANGE OF SEASON what’s the difference october from september – is it simply time to put on a warmer coat, a condition of one’s mind? what’s the difference? is there a hazy region a mystic soul’s eye, retreat to inner being, a sort of hidden season? all i know is this – i sense the whole world has changed - sun less warm, less bright colors are taken cover, a sixth sense taken over

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Date: 11/27/2013 12:54:00 AM
Hello Daver, , Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
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Date: 10/9/2013 1:11:00 AM
thanks for your comments today , Daver. I always enjoy seeing what you have to say. you are a great friend.
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Date: 10/6/2013 1:03:00 AM
I really love this one, Daver. GREAT tanka poetry from you. Funny story about your chocolate eating!!
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Date: 10/4/2013 9:04:00 AM
That sixth sense tells me too........there is less of a carefree feeling that comes when school starts, and holidays are on the horizon. Makes me a bit melancholy until I get in the right frame of mind. :) Happy October, Daver!
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Date: 10/2/2013 8:46:00 AM
You are right in saying the sixth sense is taken over, very profound write, daver
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Date: 10/2/2013 5:14:00 AM
.... Yes, everything has been changed ... very well written Daver. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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