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Change of Clothes

Long twisted stretching tendrils Dressed in green summer clothes Skin hard wrinkled and furrowed Turn to rustic burnished copper and golds Shiver in Autumn As the cold wind blows. Peter Dome.copyright.2014.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/25/2016 6:12:00 AM

Super cool poem here. Lots of spectacular imagery that makes the reader think. (: Good job. Thanks for sharing your work with us. Rated this a 7++

Peter Dome
Date: 12/25/2016 12:01:00 PM

Thank you so much. made my day. you're so kind. Take good care. My best wishes. Pete.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/15/2014 8:54:00 AM

Lots of imagery here...I'm with Peter...you made us FEEL the elements. Great write.

Peter Dome
Date: 8/15/2014 9:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Eileen, it's such a pleasure to hear from you. So glad you enjoyed it take good care. Warm best wishes. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2014 8:20:00 AM

- Beautiful written, Peter .............. but, I do not wish autumn welcome yet ... - oxox // Anne-Lise :))

Peter Dome
Date: 8/13/2014 6:30:00 PM

Thank you kind lady. Glad you enjoyed it. I don't want autumn to come yet either. Take care, best wishes.Pete,