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As the fog rises from the vale Reaching upwards to the sky And crickets sing their song Thoughts leave the port and fly Fly away thoughts to years gone by When times were nostalgic Great-granddaddy had hopes and dreams Which became weighted with bricks Placed in the raging streams and gone Like winds flush the chaff What were those hopes for the future No thoughts of a spacecraft As a golden ball breaks through clouds An eerie gold radiance The sun pierces the fog's hold on nature Revealing change in cadence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/17/2015 5:58:00 AM
Sara so delicate are your lines.. beautiful and drawing1~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 7/17/2015 3:17:00 AM
Dear Sara, lovely how you contemplate the natural change as fog/mist is burnt away to reveal nothing but beauty~Delice
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Date: 7/16/2015 7:29:00 PM
You got me with this one. Simply must add this to my fav list.. Bravo! A7
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Date: 7/16/2015 6:47:00 PM
like treasures coming out from shells.. beautiful thoughts on nature and nurturance, sara.. huggs
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Date: 7/16/2015 1:51:00 PM
- Time never stands still ..... - A lovely poem, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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