Change

Life keeps on shifting, never the same, Like a beautiful melody, a vibrant flame. In constant change, we all take part, A masterpiece of art, a work of heart. Each day's a brushstroke on the canvas of time, A mountain to climb, a bell's sweet chime. Embrace the change, don't hide or fear, For in every moment, something dear.

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/22/2023 1:38:00 PM

I just love your positivity Ariana, such a nice rhyme and flow too. keep spilling the ink! Blessings from Scotland, Gordon

Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/23/2023 5:56:00 AM

Hi again! I'll keep writing poems, thank you for comment! I'm still learning. Have a happy day!

Silent One

Date: 10/21/2023 8:53:00 AM

Great rhymes Ariana... the flow is really good too.. bit like a song.

Silent One
Date: 10/21/2023 8:59:00 AM

I'm not that good but thank you

Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/21/2023 8:58:00 AM

Thank you a lot, I'm really really trying my best. I'm so flattered that you think that about my poems, because you are really good at poetry, I absolutely love the topics of your poems. Thanks!

Mark Hughes

Date: 10/19/2023 11:56:00 AM

Well done Ariana, a very positive piece! I love the 1st line of the 2nd stanza!

Ariana Pataki
Date: 10/19/2023 10:29:00 PM

Thanks Mark for your comment, it's the intention of the poem, positive thoughts! :-)