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In her teens, she had a wasp waist All her dress would then nicely fit Now she is all blubber More or less like rubber She has no waist, is a barrel of fat This woman is called Malory She doesn’t care for the calorie All that she got, she ate And grew into a sight Now she can move only in a lorry

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2023 6:23:00 AM

Sad one. She (real or imaginary) probably has some kind of defective gene/s that cause this malady. If only people could get the proper medical care for obesity. There is help with the correct doctor. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2021 11:28:00 AM

haha, move only on a lorry. REALLY FUNNY ending!!

Valsa George
Date: 11/21/2021 9:06:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Andrea ! Glad you enjoyed it !

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/20/2021 7:09:00 PM

Poor Malory. Her 'wasp waist' is now paste. Former boasts are toast... Fat is where she's at: Her gallery, lots of calories. Cute one, Valsa. :) gw

Valsa George
Date: 11/20/2021 8:52:00 PM

You have written a funny limerick as a comment! Rhyme and humour seem to be at your finger tip.... Gershon Thanks a lot for this lovely response.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/20/2021 10:36:00 AM

All those sugar-water drinks are aptly called "pop" . . . . . Aloha! Rico

Valsa George
Date: 11/20/2021 8:50:00 PM

Those drinks are so harmful to health and lead to obesity ! Thanks Rico for visiting my page!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 11/20/2021 6:37:00 AM

This gave ma a pang. No trouser of mine seem to fit. Must go to some tailor. -)

Valsa George
Date: 11/20/2021 8:02:00 AM

Shut indoors with the pademic around, cooking and eating is all I do. So have gained extra pounds and I too am looking for a nice tailor! Thank you Victor for your funny response.